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The Note

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The Note

Alafair Burke is known for her clever, twisty mysteries, and THE NOTE is no exception. She keeps us guessing almost to the end. There are three female protagonists, and while they refer to themselves as best friends, several windows into the past make us wonder just how "bestie" they actually are.

Interestingly, the novel is told in third person from different characters' points of view, but one character is left out. We get to understand two of the women through the narrative that lets us know how they feel and what they are thinking, but there is one person we don't get to know on that level. Does that serve to make us distrust that individual a bit more than the others?

"Burke's ability to have us care about these people is what makes her books so popular, and by the end of this novel, we do hope that these flawed women find their way to a better future."

The three women vacation together in the Hamptons, and we see their personalities emerge. May is definitely the introvert, the worrier, the planner. Kelsey is the drinker, the heavy drinker, the partier. Lauren is the oldest. She can drink and plan, and she often seems like the glue that holds the trio together. What we learn through Burke's slow reveal of their past is that each has had something in her life that was not only traumatic, but that made her infamous for a while.

May went viral in a video that showed her reacting to someone calling her an Asian pejorative right after COVID. She was questioning people waiting for the subway as to why they weren't following the rules about wearing masks on public transportation. Her reaction, her terrible overreaction, changed the trajectory of her life; she became a law school professor rather than a prosecutor.

Lauren's viral moment was after years of being involved with a much older, wealthier man who owned the music camp where the girls met. May and Kelsey attended the camp, and Lauren was a talented musician who ran the music department. After an anonymous note revealed her relationship with the owner, and right after a woman drowned on the campgrounds, Lauren left the camp. She was the only person of color in a position of authority at the camp, and she felt it was logical that the drowning would be blamed on her.

Kelsey comes from an extremely wealthy family whose success had murky beginnings. She worked as a successful commercial real estate broker but was pretty much at her father's beck and call. He was an overprotective parent, especially after the murder of her husband several years before. Because Kelsey and her husband were in the process of divorcing, there were rumors that she had him killed. And there were reasons why she might have been better off with him dead than simply out of her life.

When the three friends are looking for a place to park on their way to dinner, a couple steals the spot that was clearly theirs. They release their frustrations at this wrongdoing by writing anonymous notes to the couple after downing several drinks. May's note is sensible and mentions responsibility and fairness. Lauren's is short but brilliant: "He's cheating. He always cheats." The women laugh, Kelsey pockets the notes saying she's going to create a scrapbook for them, and they think nothing more about it. But when the guy ends up dead with a gunshot to his head, just like Kelsey's husband, and there are connections to the women, there's no more laughing.

May has always loved solving mysteries. As a prosecutor, she worked the crimes and kept digging into inconsistencies even after she had enough to prosecute. So now she's determined to find out who really killed the man and maybe even who murdered Kelsey's husband. There are definite twists and surprises as the narrative reveals much about the past actions of the characters, including things they'd rather not remember.

But as we'd suspect with an author of Burke's caliber, the ending is not only unexpected, it's heartbreaking in many ways. The novel is about family --- the family we are born into but also the family we create along the way. It's about people whose intentions are good, but how sometimes even the best of intentions can end up going horribly wrong. Each of these characters has done things that turned out tragically wrong, and the ending shows us how little we might be in control of our own destiny.

Burke's ability to have us care about these people is what makes her books so popular, and by the end of this novel, we do hope that these flawed women find their way to a better future.

Reviewed by Pamela Kramer on January 10, 2025

The Note
by Alafair Burke